This is a great first draft cover - it is very well laid-out and your main image is strong. A few changes needed but nearly there: - find another image for the 'and' pic down the bottom - have you got another image from your shoot rather than a poster? - make the yellow a little bolder / brighter (just a touch) - add more cover lines and make the text bigger - add an apostrophe in who's on the main cover line
Sammy,
ReplyDeleteThis is a great first draft cover - it is very well laid-out and your main image is strong. A few changes needed but nearly there:
- find another image for the 'and' pic down the bottom - have you got another image from your shoot rather than a poster?
- make the yellow a little bolder / brighter (just a touch)
- add more cover lines and make the text bigger
- add an apostrophe in who's on the main cover line
Great start,
EllieB